Hmmm... I see a few problems here. Your eye seems to be on the ball okay, but you need to keep your left arm straighter. Your grip is interesting. What do you call it? A 'monkey-wrench'? And they don't seem to be too particular about attire at the course you're playing... just be careful of a 'banana-split' when playing without shoes

Welcome to the circus... tsk... I mean GR!

PS: I'm only kidding - cool avatar